First we watched a video of what happens when you go caving so that we could get a sense of what we would be experiencing. We then brainstormed some ideas of what we could be doing in the cave. We had to work on keeping one idea per paragraph. We are also learning to show the reader what is going on through descriptive language rather than just telling them. Please check out some of our stories that we have written and share on our blogs this week: Angelica, Aye Myat, Kiarah, Tyson and Jordan.
Hey Miss Parrant,
ReplyDeletethank you for featuring me in your blog post. I know this post was a little bit longer ago and its been a while now but I only JUST managed to see this post! Writing about caving was REALLY fun, do you wish to ever go caving?
Thanks,
Aye :)